I have to say, I really think you nailed the concept of what a "logo" really should be with this.
I will suggest rounding off the front part of the lowercase "a" off where it sticks out. If there were another lowercase letter leading into it, that's where it would connect. I don't think it's necessary and it will help the "a" read a bit better.
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