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Uprooted EpilogueMany years since then, he and I have met up on several occasions, often competing together in kart and baseball games, but each time, I'm happy that I'm able to see him again. We've told each other countless times of the battles we've had with those humans, more importantly the Mario Bros. and how they carelessly destroy our minions and homes. I guess I'm grateful most of all that I'm able to sympathize with somebody who feels the same way about those guys as I do. As much as we fail to stand up to them, though, we vowed that we'd pick ourselves up and beat them again next time.
And where is he now, you might ask? That's beyond me. For all I

Uprooted Epilogue

by ~7-Bit

Critique by =MyBurningEyes Aug 27, 2012, 11:03:09 AM

I like the mario games and this story is a nice headspin on how the story of some characters could have been before the actuall well-known series.

The overall story is sweet, and kinda fits in the whole mario style of stories because it has a happy ending and a logical story curve. I would have liked some further explenations on how the boo's actually scare though.

For the whole story i'd like to see some semi-kiddy cartoon (because it fits the goofyness of Petey i think) drawings showing these kind of things to make it more appealing and more funny, because they look more funny then scary most of the time.

The story as a whole is, although maybe a tad long, nice and it would be cool to read the old story of other characters aswell!

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~7-Bit Aug 27, 2012 Hobbyist General Artist

First of all, thank you for taking the time to read the story. That was awesome of you.

Second, this is actually a story of how Petey Piranha and King Boo met, and it's not necessarily focused on much of anything else (although I will agree- A paragraph or two about the Boos scaring others would be a nice fit).

And I'm sorry that it was long. ^_^'' Maybe next time I'll try to shorten it a little bit. But on the other hand, how else could've I had the time to explain everything?

=MyBurningEyes Aug 29, 2012 Professional Digital Artist

Of course, anytime

Yeah just as a little touch, although i understand why it isn't in it

Yeah some story's just need explenations right?

~7-Bit Aug 29, 2012 Hobbyist General Artist

Yeah, I suppose so. x3

Of course they do! That's what makes them good!

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Uprooted Epilogue

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